Hello, lovelies! I have returned yet again to goosh about my feelings! Okay, not really, but I'm STILL happy! How long has it been? Over a month, I'm sure. That's a record for me. Anywho...Oh, before I forget, I heard weird voices in my head today. They were screaming at me. It sounded like "That's not the way." I don't know. I've always said I was crazy. I think I overexaggerated it a bit. They weren't really screaming, more like talking loudly. And they weren't prominant in my head. Just a passing insight. I'll keep an ear out for more. Also I didn't notice till now that the title of this was meant to apply to the fact that I'm seeing the Jonas Brothers movie on Friday and everyone knows how fans get, but it also goes well with the voices thing. Huh, whaddaya know. Haha. But, the real reason I decided to post today, the story I was explaining before. I've rewritten a bit of it. IF I get the laptop my dad said I might, then I'll get more of it done. Writing so much has began to take its toll on my already bad hands and fingers. Typing is much easier.
Well, the story's called Broken Sunset. I was hoping it didn't sound too much like Breaking Dawn. If it does, I'll change it. Like I said, it's a Twilight based story. Me, well not really me, as the main character. It's similar to Twilight plot-wise. Only this time, it's Jasper who can't resist the smell of a certain characters (me) blood. I start out human, unlike my other story, and I move to La Push to live with my aunt and uncle. That's where I meet Jacob. He doesn't know what to think of me when he sees me in a very rare sports car. After making friends with him I realize the wolfiness inside him since my father's father was a werewolf too. I don't think at the time that he worries about me and my genes. Since Seth is my cousin and my father wasn't a werewolf, he thinks I may be one too. He ditches me a few times, which begins to get on my nerves a couple days go by and I never hear from him. I decide to venture into the near-by town of Forks. That's where I first see Jasper, convering his mouth, looking at me in disgust. I don't know what to think of it. I wander around town, not knowing what I just witnessed, and I happen upon a group of rowdy teenage boys who get a little rough. That's when Jasper steps in to help me. That day made me think. He knew my name, scaring me. I soon find out he's a friend of Jacob's, explaining only a few things. I (after getting ditched by Jacob again) decide to hike. Something I'd done many Summers before. The clearing was meant to be the Baseball claering but it ended up sounding like the meadow. I'll fix that later. In the clearing is where I run into Edward and Jasper (hunting). They don't seem happy to see me and I'm not sure why. Edward speaks to me only twice but I'm mesmerised by him immediately. Though my focus never sways from Jasper. I go to the hospital on a favor to my uncle and hear two men dissagreeing about something to do with fast cars, making me feel a tad guilty. A beautiful blonde man who turns out to be Carlisle, speaks to me. He too, mesmerises me. When he leaves is the moment I meet Alice. That leads to her very pursuasuve nature and I somehow find myself at the Cullen home. After a rant from Edward and Jacob, I try to leave. But no one will let me. This is where I've stopped but it will lead to them telling me about Vampires. I will fight against it which pleases Edward slightly. Then they'll tell me about a group of Vampires that caught my scent in the clearing. I pretty much freak out. Like I would in real life. But I calm after a while. I don't know wether I want to get captured and bitten, turning me into a vampire then and there as the fight goes on, or having Jasper change me. I'll keeping Alice in the story, since the mate for life thing. But I'll be hanging around with them, my scent too strong to keep him away like with Edward and Bella. And I don't want to leave either. I've decided not to give myself a power since that's very uncommon. It would've been manipulation if I did. There are key points I didn't mention, but those will have to wait. I'll probably be posting a chapter or two on here, just to see what people think. I'm not trying to completely rip Twilight off, but I made a few similar plot points.
If you hate it, please tell me. Though even if you do, I'll most likely still write more.
Meh es outehs.
